I need to remind you that english is not my native language so please excuse the mistakes that may exist here!
it would be nice to know your opinion!
Moonlght Mermaid
Shadows created by the moon
in the night when nature sleeps
some flowers under the stars bloom
and a song's coming out of a mermaid's lips
A fisherman under the stars lies
but sleep doesn't come, he can't close his eyes
So he counts the stars falling in his boat
He's not very far from the shore
Out of the calm and peacefull water
comes out she, the moonlight's daughter
with her blue eyes and silver hair
she's bathing pouring water from a shell
And when he sees her, he takes off his clothes
jumps in the water, swims to her close
and grabs the shell from her hands
she gets angry, to shout she starts
"I'll give it back if you pay with a kiss"
but he hadn't imagine the sweet taste of her lips
She takes the shell and turns to leave
but "one more kiss you'll have to give"
And when she does he holds her tight
and he pulls her closer, passion can't hide
He feels his chest touching hers
over the moonlight dress
And she is charmed by his strength
the heat of his breath on her neck
She feels something unsaid before
He thinks he found what he's been searching for
But when the first light of the sun appears
the moonlight's daughter disappears
but he still has the shell in his hand
a promise that at night she"ll come back...
would you like to correct sth?
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