Read and rate my story?

Question

Thanks and by the way, it is written by an eleven-year-old girl and its only the first chapter. I need to edit it a lot more, so keep that in mind. http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2545686/1/Secrets_Revealed_in_Shadows

Answer 1

Sure. :]

here's a link to my story, in case you would want to read and review it as well:

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/624187/col...

Answer 2

Morgan, is that you??

Answer 3

You could also post it on http://www.chapteread.com to receive more feedback. It's a great writing site, I've been on it for a while now and they give really good feedback.