Read me poem?

Question

What do you think? I know, it's weird, but it's how I write.

Through the forest

Nestled in the shoulder of the hills

They are there

Peaceful and strange

We can't see them

But this race of people exists

They are there

Watching the ground

Unearthly times

Yet they still manage a form of peace

They are there

Wanna see them?

Gentle people

The ones of the far away forests

Will not leave

They will stay home

They prefer love

Instead of a rancid form of hate

They are there

The gentle ones

Answer 1

That is awesome.

Answer 2

It's somewhat strange because I'm not 100% sure who you are writing about...

Ah--hold on..I think I get it now...the forest is the world...these rare beings represent people in modern society that are not full of hate...they are undistinguishable  from the masses of people full of hatred and violence...yet rare. They're simply in peace with themselves and their surroundings...so when you ask..."Wanna see them?"...your asking us whether we are the "gentle ones" or the ones full of hate...something like that right? Brilliant :)

Answer 3

a graded

Answer 4

Its not weaird it is just briliant!!!

Answer 5

I like your poem theme very much, yet needs some edit, and I

am not a master of that. To many, "They are there" I give you a star, maybe others will read it, who are master editors.

Answer 6

i love it. it brings an awesome vision in my mind.. and it just opens my eyes how cool it would be to actually live in a gentle world.. today stuffs all messed up and crazy.. this poem is very relaxing, and even brings hope. great work!

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Answer 7

This is brilliant! it gets me to think of what its referring to then surprises me with the answer being the mere "gentle people"

and asking us if we want to see them kind of gives us an opportunity to realize that its in all of us. Very simple yet deep

"A poetry that could make changes"

Answer 8

Simple,working on two layers yet maintained the flow,its like a whisper to a gentile awakening, a description of how U categorize people according to their humane/moral/peaceful conduct : gentleness. I like it a lot .. plz write again .. give me a buzz when U do. thanks.