Read my poem..pretty please? :]?

Question

I spend late nights thinking of you,

I wish that I didn't,

It seems inadeuquate at times,

But you- you were the first man I ever knew,

The first person to hold my hand,

The first person I walked beside,

The first person to break my heart,

And the first person Iv'e ever missed,

Sometimes you were drunk,

Sometimes you were mean,

But yes, I love you anyway- the first man I ever knew,

You used me abused me, left me and hurt me,

But over the years I grew to accept you,

After all the pain, scars, and lonsome years,

I forgive you,

And I love you dad,

The first man I ever knew.

what do you think?

Answer 1

wow, I really liked this. I hope it's not true, but it is a really good poem. wow, great job.

Answer 2

i really like the concept, and the way you approached the topic, and how you set up the poem.  I think there's lots of opportunity to build on what you have.  It just needs some editing to make the words in the poem more elegantly explain your subject.  It's a beautiful start, btw.