Read my poem!?

Question

Read my poem! And tell me its great !

Its all about love, at the age of eight

Read my poem! Tell me how you feel !

It sounds real convincing, but none of its real

Read my poem! Its well worth your time !

Its not about feelings, it just so happened to rhyme

Read my poem ! And give me good ratings !

My poems not bad, you are just hating

READ MY POEM!! But I forgot to mention...

I just wrote this to get some attention.

Answer 1

Well now; let us see shall we?

Take out "real" in L4.

Take out "so" in L6

Replace "But I forgot..." with "Oh, I forgot..."

Then tell us a little about the love affair, which unfortunately you have not done.

If you do this I will give you 6/10, maybe 7/10.

Robert

Answer 2

You did very very well

I can tell

I like the rhyming

and its keeping the timing

I will mention

you have my attention

Take your time don't worry

and not to hurry

Here is a ten