Read my poem? :]?

Question

Young like a child,

Old like the earth,.

Weak like the lonsome,

Strong like lifes worth,

Loud like sweet laughter,

Quiet like the sea,

Happy like the sun light,

Sad like the willow tree,

Dark like the black cat,

Light like the sky,

Who I am is who I'll be,

When year after year goes by.

Answer 1

Very nice!  I always enjoy reading contradictions in poems when they make sense in respect to its meaning.  Also, the length is perfect for the subject of the poem, you didn't drown it in too many words, and you didn't leave it out to dry without enough words.  Thank you for sharing:)