Read my very short story and tell me if its good or not?

Question

once apon a time there was a bird it was different from all birds it ate macaroni and cheese and one day his nest fell and all the birds tried the mac n cheese and they stopped eating worms and started eating and stealing mac n cheese

the end

i know its a dome story but i got bored

Answer 1

tell how the nest fell and tell more about why he likes mac and chees or how he tried it the first time

Answer 2

I like it! is there a sequel to this story?=)

Answer 3

wow

Answer 4

its not dome your dome its gode

Answer 5

Hahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahah

*ehem* Yah it was pretty good.....

Answer 6

read the harry potter series then try again.

Answer 7

It's not dome, it's gode.