Read these songs i've written and rate on a scale of 10!!! please please read!!!!?

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song 1: "Someday"

When I look out the window

I feel like I have been here

For at least a century

We have spent all the times

Together with each other

But I don’t know when

I may have to leave

Ch: Someday I’ll be driving away

Someday I’ll be leaving you

Someday I’ll not be here

Someday I may be gone

Maybe forever, I don’t know

Of for how long, can’t say

I don’t know when I may leave

I have been locked up

I search for something far away

What I want is not in this town

Someday I wanna be away

I’ve got my dreams

Just don’t wanna survive

I wanna live my way

I am going to drive away (Someday)

I am going to get far away (someday)

I am going to leave home (Someday)

Someday I’ll be gone

Far way, someday

Song 2: "Tears"

Time has taken a toll on me

I am not as I used to be

I often get the blues

My life seems way too loose

I’ve gotta hold on tight

To win over this fight

I’m gonna be much harder

Will be a fighter

Ch: There’s nothing in life at all

What I used to have

Is left no more

What I have, I am ready

To shed them down

And they are my tears

These will soon fall upon my cheek

My soul is tired

I cry often on the inside

Outside I seem fine

But in reality I have

Been going down with my fears

And keep on shedding tears

I am wet with my tears

These won’t stop falling down

I am crying more on the inside

Than I appear on the outside

What I had, I shed them down

Which are my tears

These won’t falling down

song 3: "You & Me"

Any day you wanna come

I’ll be right here

I’m ready to wait a lifetime

Just for you

You know my heart’s aching

But I don’t mind it

If this bit of waiting

Can get you by my side

Ch: how will I know

How we’re gonna be

I want to keep the doors open

Just for you

It would be so good

Falling in love

You and me

Oh yeah, you and me

You know we’re meant to be

Don’t know when you’ll see

Would it really take a lifetime

For you

I know my patience’s ending

How do I make you

See who loves you the best

Me or her

I can wait but still

I am impatient

I can’t wait any longer

For you and me

We’re just meant to be

You and me

I wish there was you and me

You and me

Just you and me

Answer 1

The lyrics are beautiful, but if you have a particular tune in mind, you should also post that. The lyrics themselves, 8.5/10

Answer 2

I am a musical composer myself, and this is some good stuff you have here.

a 9.5/10 for me.

It is great to even think of a tune to go with these songs, you can go anywhere you want.

If you don't have music, ask me, I will put music to it if you'd like, or you can even just be a poet.

These are great lyrics though.

Answer 3

i dont evn no the tune so i wouldnt no

Answer 4

7

Answer 5

they were deep, real deep, lots of feelings

10

Answer 6

I would say an overall 8.5.

They sound like very good lyrics!

I especially like your second song.

You're an awesome writer.

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