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Read this Other poem?

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as i sit thinking of what life would be like if there was no you

telling the truth seems so hard to bare

i think of the stars

feel the wind rush through my hair

Sounds of the ocean seem so comepling

i hear your voice wanting

breathing

listening

to every word that i say,

the moment is know its forever

I run around circling the earth.

everything is so quiet

i can only hear you, only you

i am deep within thought i seem to have been gone for some time

I try to reach for something to grab onto, bring my self up

than I realized your the one there standing holding me up!

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  1. Aww <3 Cute!

    I liked it! The rhythm isn't the best, but I like the end =]


  2. Quite nice, heartfelt+interesting, 8/10, liked it...

  3. Interesting and heartfelt, good...
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