Question:

Really lame poem.?

by  |  earlier

0 LIKES UnLike

I'm a meticulously planned disaster counting cubes of color, yet I lack enchanted hue.

I wind and gyre, I parry and I flicker. I spray the ocean with desire and lyrical finesse.

The foam may din onto the supple champagne waterfront, but I... I elevate the mire from beneath the bounding main; true that it too craves to feast it's eyes upon the twinkling sapphire crest.

I replenish the winds that often make the trunks of trees sway: permanently nesting that way.

I created the grass that sought only to culminate -indulging children in their jest.

And yet, the heavens disseminate as I hail it to do my bidding. The leaves of autumn ebb; consuming the dusty terrain. I - myself - am the creator of all things imminently radiant.

I manipulate my personal nature to compete with that of high power.

I am myself, independent and ashamed of what I have become.

 Tags:

   Report

1 ANSWERS


  1. I like it!

    Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder...

    Everyone has their own opinion on things...If you believe it's lame...it's lame... If you believe it's great, then it probably is!

    You have a beautiful lilt to your style of poetry, a very discripitive vocabulary...well done :)

You're reading: Really lame poem.?

Question Stats

Latest activity: earlier.
This question has 1 answers.

BECOME A GUIDE

Share your knowledge and help people by answering questions.
Unanswered Questions