A poem please read?

Question

excuse me,

could u do me favor

and take this heart off of my hands?

its slightly damaged:

cracked and bruised.

but please, just take it away.

do with it as you wish;

nothing put it in worse condition than it is.

it been battered and beaten,

mangled and crushed.

but i swear it will do you no harm.

please,

oh please kind sir,

i beg of you.

take my pain away.

Answer 1

I like it, too.

Answer 2

Not too bad but not original.

This theme has been used many times.

Being original is hard to do

Pain can be difficult to write poetry about.

It is so easy to fall into sentimentality.

Answer 3

That is a lovely poem.  If it is explaining your heart, then maybe we could friends so that uou don't have a broken heart because it almost made me cry.

Answer 4

I can relate to it, and the best form of poetry is getting people to relate to what you know best. It's like showing that you have nothing left but your emotions drained from your damaged heart and all your asking for is a sign of peace. Very understanding, keep it up =)

Answer 5

A heart broken. Stepped on like a rose along the way. Ignored just by asking for attention and the good that dwells inside of it. Passed by without so much as a glance, not knowing the deep hurt it catches from the passing breeze. Indeed it is a sad poem of a broken heart,that only asked for a recognition of the love abounding inside it. You deserve a revitalization of a failed love.