A poem "Milk" thoights?

Question

Milk

Your snowy contents

Warmed my mind

Brought creature comforts

Appeasing my demons

If just for a moment

Headaches and heartbreak

Unattainable goals

Your sweetness drew me near

I drank you in

I forgot my sorrows

If only for a minute

Yet as time shaved

So did our connection

And something changed

Your crumpled carton

Dripped condensation

Sour breath discharging

Your contents spoiled

and our time expired

Answer 1

LOVE IT!!!

Answer 2

it makes me remember Sylvia Plath!! don't know why!!

Answer 3

LOL. yeah its great. It takes a person with creativity to write a poem about milk. It looks and sounds like you worked really hard on it. Looking forward to more.

-A

Answer 4

Fantastic!! This is a great poem. You do a great job of really digging deeper and putting an unusual perspective on a topic most people wouldn't think to write poetry about. Very original and creative, and you have a lot of skill with the English language. Your poem also has a great rise and fall to it, with that plot twist at the end. ;) Plus, most people (save for this world's oddballs that don't like milk) can identify with it.

Answer 5

"Hi!"

Another great poem.  

WELL DONE!  : )

Answer 6

That's good...  But, I notice that most of your poems seem to be about relationships.

Answer 7

that is truly amazing. i love milk!

Answer 8

um sorry but isnt it kind of wierd to write a poem about milk?