A very short poem opinions please...?

Question

Is there a soul?

If so, what is a soul?

Can you please tell me

Where can I find one?

Because it sounds such a wonderful thing

I'm trying to find mine every day

I read somewhere that it doesn't exist

It's imaginary just like god

Is it mu fault?

Is it the people?

Is it the town?

I really don't know

In this world

I'm still searching for my soul

If I ever find it

You will be the first to know

Answer 1

Soulless

by Tori

((c) 0807.14)

You are born with a soul,

bonded with your body.

How could you lose it?

You cannot, but you can

deceive yourself that it

is gone because you

are too good for others.

Do you want your soul back?

Then step off your pedestal

and bend down to help the

needy, reach out to offer warmth

to one who is cold, give yourself

and find your soul.

T.

Answer 2

i like it very much. 8D your good at poetry

Answer 3

Multiple thoughts .. and feelings.. and U R concerned of others to let them know of the good things.

and it is imaginary that is perceived conceptually .. for it is one of God's greatest work.. the essence of life.

U haven't lost balance of the flow .. control upon words .. Ur own beliefs R hidden .. nice work..!!

Answer 4

With a moniker

like yours,

a soul will be

a hard thing to find.

A soul,

reaches out,

uncondescending,

and becomes

empathy,

not

derision.