Another poem!?

Question

scraped glass and zig-zag shapes

draw an outlined sunset

hungry birds hide in the corners

ringing their beaks at bikini girls

eating with their mouths open

spilling mold

there's a green scent in the air

like rotten seaweed

but when the angry fowls l**k the tip of the ice cream cloud

the sky will go blank

and the girls will be gone

Answer 1

I don't like the bikini part...

Answer 2

is good :) its definetly different and i think thats pretty cool n.n

kudos!!

Answer 3

Meeh.

It Didn't Flow.

Though The Overall Poem.

Was Rather.

Splendid.