Any comments on this rhyming poem?

Question

Love Is A Rocky Road

Love can be a rocky road

that can lead straight through h**l,

stomp your heart, crush your soul;

why we need it, is impossible to tell

except that love can also resurrect

and create life anew,

the legs to stand

wings to fly;

a life with purpose too.

Both a blessing and a pain

that drives us to our knees

praying,

“God help me find someone

just to hold onto please.

I know your love is near me

I hear your voice deep inside;

in your eyes I find such grace,

but I still need human comfort,

someone of my own in this earthen place.”

Answer 1

its cute but is there supposed to be a regular rhyming pattern? if not, just make it a nonrhyming poem, those a nice too

Answer 2

Love is a rocky road because you can hate that person just as much as you love them.

Answer 3

I think it is a good poem. Good for you. Keep on being poetically creative.

Answer 4

This is a very good insight into love. I think it's written beautify and would love to be able to write like this.

Answer 5

This poem makes sense here

because love can occur in

different ways

I can be sweet and caring

or it can be risky and daring

Love can be kind

or it can be unkind

As one will find

Love can be pleasure

meaning of good times

or it can be a pain

if there is a breakup