Any constructive critique??

Question

http://zephyr13.deviantart.com/art/Suckers-suck-91783158

its supposed to be cartoony (it should be obvious but one person said it wasn't so I figure I should put that down) Its done in prisma color pencil and black ink, and the colors are bright and multiple because I enjoy using them that way.normally when I post a critique question people focus on the saturation of the color, I am not looking to change that so if its something you think I should fix thats ok, just don''t go on and on about it if you critique because I did that purposefully and am happy with it. Thank you!

also if you are going to be an a** go do it somewhere else.

and it is a picture not a scan.

Answer 1

Great contrast with the cool colors and the warm colors. Good organic shapes that creates movement.

I'm trying to find something to critic, but nothing. I love it.  

Answer 2

Very nice work!   I would add some shadow / light...   If it's in water, you might want to add some water reflective... you know... like how sparkling water moves.   All in all, I would say it's pretty good work.  I do like the character's expression lol. Great job on that!