Any feedback on a poem?

Question

When all is well she is never noticed,

When there is light she is overshadowed,

Only when stained by the dark

Her true beauty is shown

She sacrificed living pure to illuminate the unknown

Ostracized, her soliloquy diminishes our fear

Living only to as a tool to be used

Dying only to be resurrected

To bring forth a greater light

Lunar synchronicity

Answer 1

last line is shoved in just for the heck of gimmick.

first two lines have no parallelism and thus, don't fit well.

(light/shadow does not equate to well/notice)

fourth line is generic

fifth line can be worded better

sixth line, clearly just doesnt make sense

seventh line, is generic

eighth line is very very generic

nineth line is somewhat religious =D

last line is whatever i said before

(good job? work harder?)