Are these good poems??!?! please answer!?

Question

Everyone gets embarrassed

Everyone trips and falls

Everyone burps in front of their crush

Don’t get so embarrassed that you run away

Because everyone gets embarrassed and that’s just gods way

Of saying that everyone isn’t perfect

No, not even Heidi Klum

Everyone does something that will make them fume

We all do things that we wish we didn’t do

All I have to say is, just be you

Answer 1

yea the first is tooooooooooo nice i really liked it from my heart really really

the second is too nice, i swear i copied them ;)

Answer 2

They seemed like they were works of a beginner but I loved them because they seemed really heartfelt and easy to relate to. I loved the second one especially! Its was so sincere.

cheers!~

Answer 3

lol. Hmm. very cool. Your great. thanks for reading mine and i am 14 today! so yeah!

Answer 4

I think the first poem is cute and funny. The second poem is deep and seems like it's coming from someplace deep in a young person's heart.

I did like them though.