Are these lines good for poems?

Question

ok these two lines are from two totally different poems that i wrote i just want to know if they are good and what your thoughts are on them

line #1: "when I wished on a shooting star I didn't know that it was the meteor that was gonna crash into my dreams"

line #2: "every rose has some thorns but my rose always seems to have the most"

Answer 1

#1 most definitely, it just sounds better :]

Answer 2

Very good lines ur a great poet!!!!~