Care to critique my poem?

Question

I get a tingling sensation

Whenever I vacation

My body next to yours

We have so much fun indoors

There’s no reason to go outside

Just a quick glance

At your backside

Causes me to tear off your pants

And put you in a trance

Of incredible romance

Answer 1

To be honest, it's very sweet, but I think that you could continue and add a few more stanzas to explore some of the poem's theme a little further. But it's up to you,obviously.

Answer 2

hahhaahaa it's cute in that sexual kind of way lmfao.

it starts off kinda juvenile though.

Answer 3

whenever I vacation? Eh, i guess you can keep it in there,...

Everything else!!! beautiful! (great ryhming by the way

Answer 4

Ha That's A Nice Poem did you have anybody certain on your mind cause you should probley recite it to them.