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維也納是世界名城，奧地利首都，以“音樂之都”聞名,最有名的莫過於莫札特.那裡的風...

巴洛克式的建築也讓人眼睛為之一亮,只要到過那裡的遊客,回來都不忘推薦他們的博物館...

此外，維也納還是購物天堂和美食天地。從葡萄園釀制的純正葡萄酒到風靡世界的奧地利咖...

Vienna is one of the most famous cities in the world, the capital of Austria and also known as the City of Music; the great musician, Mozart also lived in Vienna. The environment there is very beautiful and many tourists travel there every year. There are the romantic Danube River and the famous Alps.

The Baroque architecture is very outstanding. All travelers who have been there would recommend the museums there; the museums have a large collection of important and valuable European arts and paintings so it is worth to pay a visit there.

Besides, Vienna is also a heaven for shopping and dinning; from high quality red wine that is made in the vineyard to the famous Austrian coffee, or from the brands of the world top designers to the precious antique and interesting souvenir, one can find everything in this wonderful city.

Answer 1

1. put a full stop after world

2. put a full stop after City of Music

3. Instead of saying "There are the romantic Danube River..." I would say, "A few of Vienna's treasure include the romantic Danube River and the famous Alps.

4. Travellers to Vienna would recommend the museums ,mainly because of the large collection of valuable European art.

5. Take out the Besides (it's not always good to start a sentence with a preposition).  

6. full stop after dining. (spell check not dinning)

7. High quality red wine made in the vineyard, famous Austrian coffee, precious antiques are among the assemblage of things in this wonderful city.

Answer 2

最有名的莫過於莫札特.那裡的風...

Has a grammar problem. You can go to Microsoft word to figure out what it is. Just copy that sentence and paste it in Microsoft.

Answer 3

dining is spelled wrong, it is spelled dining not dinning

Answer 4

grammar sounds fine but maybe you could say  " Vienna ,the capital of Austria, is one of the most famous cities in the world.  It is known as the City of Music; the musician, Mozart, along with many other great composer created some of their most mesmerizing masterpieces here."

and " The Baroque architecture is very outstanding, it complements the artistic reputation of the city. All travelers who have been to Vienna would recommend the museums; They have a large collection of important and valuable European arts and paintings that capture the imagination and show the epic history of this City."

and " Vienna is also a heaven for shopping and dinning. From high quality red wine that is made in the vineyard to the famous Austrian coffee and from the brands of the world top designers to the precious antique and interesting souvenir, one can find everything in this wonderful city."

i think that would make it a little better but it's your paper.