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Question

The Letter

The day the letter came,

The day my life ended,

The day my world seemed to come to a close, an end.

My father, my best friend, a soldier as brave as any,

A Cornell, a father, a friend,

The day the letter came, my world ended

My mind imagined his last moments-

Did he suffer?

Did he cry?

Did he beg?

Did he think of me, did he think of his daughter, his family?

My father, my best friend, a soldier as brave as any,

A hostage- left to the mercy of others,

Left to the mercy of those who gave none

The day the letter came,

The day my life ended,

That day my world seemed to come to close, an end.

Answer 1

Aw, how sweet,

and sad

According to the letter it talks about your father

as a best friend, a soldier

colonel.

The line that says the day the letter came my world ended

this says you father died

and he was your world.  

This poem may be called the letter but

it is a token of love.

Answer 2

Well expressed feelings.. direct.. honest .. carrying a great deal of appreciation to Ur father who was Ur best friend.U 've the talent ..keep on going..wish u the best.

Answer 3

no matter how depressing- its an art- writing. You can post them because you love what you do.Keep Writing. It's your gift. I enjoyed reading it!

-A

Answer 4

why do alot of people post there depressing poems.

people need to make happier poems.

Answer 5

I agree to what  the first person said about poems

But i find this poem very touching.

Great Job!