Could you read my poem?

Question

just tell me your thoughts, likes dislikes, whatever

Dead

Garhett Marr

Everybody is dead

But they are still here

They are inside my head

And I feel no fear

Please obey my plea

Look me in the eyes

They may seem empty like the sea

But that is only my disguise

You want in

To save me from my sin

I want out

I am just not that devout

Voices in my head

So under fed

They scream to help me out

In return I can only shout

What’s wrong with sin?

What happened to shame?

It was my evil twin

But we are one in the same

Answer 1

i likede it i could actually seee it as a song