Dialogue help?

Question

mkay, im having problems with this paragraph.

“Michael, are you ready for your first day of school?”

“Yes mom, I’m coming down now!”

My mom was always rushed me on the first day of school. She was more nervous than I was to

go, and I was pretty nervous. I am always happy on my first day. Never have I been lazy to go.

I’m a straight A student and I’m the kid that always gets awards and certificates. And I’m proud

of myself.

“Hurry and grab your backpack!” my mom said. I hopped in the car, so anxious to see my new

school.

would that be rite? like the indents and stuff. would i not indent. would i not space? help?

Answer 1

“Michael, are you ready for your first day of school?”

(“Yes mom, I’m coming down now!”  [My mom was always rushed me on the first day of school. She was more nervous than I was to go, and I was pretty nervous. I am always happy on my first day. Never have I been lazy to go. I’m a straight A student and I’m the kid that always gets awards and certificates. And I’m proud of myself.] )

“Hurry and grab your backpack!” my mom said.

I hopped in the car, so anxious to see my new school.

the area in () is the person who just spoke it is his thoughts so it does not have to be separated from the "s . if you do separate it  keep The [ ] together as a paragraph