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The sky it cries

Rain falls from it’s water laden clouds

My eyes stream my pain

Only to have it return again

I beg it to leave me

Pain, he only laughs

Tortures me again

The sky cries for me

The sky cries for the world

The pain we cause each other

And the pain we cause to our selves

We should be ashamed

But yet we are not

Since it seems I cannot rid myself

Or the world

Of my enemy Pain

I will be Pain’s friend

And Pain shall be mine

Answer 1

I like it. Keep up with your writing :)

Answer 2

WOW!  I can really feel your emotion in this poem.  It seems as if your heart is talking to me.  I love it!  It makes me want to hug you, and it makes me want to write poetry!!

Answer 3

that was really moving i mean i could just feel the emotions coming out. it was really great. if you write more please share them with the answers community.

Answer 4

WOW. that is beautiful. for some reason i can't write stuff like that. ( like that as in how good it is) again though, i love it.

Answer 5

its so awesome xD

Answer 6

Beautiful!

Answer 7

I thought this was deep and excellent and you have skills.

I think this was about the world and the people of the this world.  We are so cruel to each other and year after year it gets worst. We can only change ourselves.  Excellent

Answer 8

i dont quite understand it.

but i like the part that says

the sky cries for the world

Answer 9

its awesome you should make some more

Answer 10

Wow it is beautiful really great **** you got there hold on to it =)