Does this poem make zero sense?

Question

Ok my friend thought she was a better poet than me. But really I think she just put a bunch of random words and tried to make them sound good.

It sounds good IF you don't understand English.

I didn't tell her that, but I mean... come on... it sucks lol.

Love.

it is a get-away.

secretive selection in life.

an intellectually powerful feeling.

a fear in awe.

an effective beneficial memory.

desire of affection.

a high distressed obstacle.

a disbelief doubt.

in strong like.

Answer 1

I guess you could concider it a poem but honestly, I don't like it :)

Answer 2

i don't wanna say anything mean if your friend just wanted to write poetry, and wrote honest feelings and all that...

but yeah, to me it sounds like someone just put big words together to try to make them selves sound important and show that they are a 'poet'... but uhh yeah not working they sound... not at all great. haha.

Answer 3

nope its sucks lol.

ps. tell your friend i'm sorry lol.

Answer 4

yes

Answer 5

In my opinion the poem makes some sense... but better can be done

Answer 6

welll....it had some good lines......eh.....

well no. what does 'an intellectually powerful feeling' mean? haha

sorry. your friend isnt the next emily dickinson.:)

Answer 7

I liked the poem, except for the last line ' in strong like.' Whats that supposed to mean.

Besides that,I dont really understand the rest of the poem, but in a way it does make sense you know. Just like love. Ewww.. so cheesy

xP