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Question

I wrote a poem for my gf who has been mad bummed. Is it good?

I know that family problems can be rough

And dealing with it is always tough

I just want you to know I understand

And that I am always here to hold you hand

I am not mad but I miss you like crazy

I just keep thinking about my baby

I love you so much and you know its true

My world revolves around nothing but you

Forever and ever in my arms

I love your heart, soul, smile, and charm

You are so hot, I cannot lie

I love that I am you number one guy

You make me smile everyday

Baby please never take my sun away

I will always be here to help you get through

Because baby, I am so in love with you

Dedicated to my gf of 8 months today. She has been having family issues. lol. That any good?

Answer 1

aww cute

Answer 2

it is absolutely amazing :)

you're gf is def the luckiest girl ever!!

and happy eight months btw, love you soooo much.

Answer 3

That is a very beautiful poem. Really it is, I wish there were more guys out there like you that cared this deeply. I would change the "your so hot" to your so beautiful. Girls do like when their called hot, but we love it when a guy calls us beautiful and means it. This is a very cute poem and I'm happy that you've found someone that makes you feel this way. Even though I don't know you.

Answer 4

Good job mate, i'm sure your gf would be touched

Answer 5

aww thats so sweet.

i'm sure she'll love it! (:

Answer 6

that is the sweetest thing. i love it.

Answer 7

Sounds pretty good to me - it flows nicely.

Answer 8

Dude, you are so gonna get laid...

Answer 9

yes. i wish someone would write me a poem like that. that was very sweet.

Answer 10

Very good.  Has she read it yet?  She will love it.

Answer 11

That brought tears to MY eyes. Excellent!!!!!! That would get published or it should and it would make a great song!!

Answer 12

the best poems i have seen so far on here

Answer 13

Yes - give it to her. Girls love this stuff.