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Have you suffered from morning confusion?

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Left on my pillow?

Stolen late last night?

Can't seem to find it,

though try as I might.

I'm trapped in a fog,

can't see for the haze.

White tangled cobwebs

are blinding my gaze.

Clarity of thought

has escaped my mind.

Being held hostage,

wheels failing to grind.

Mental amnesia,

sans any focus.

Morning confusion,

my thoughts are bogus.

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  1. indeed.....and my heart hurts as well.....


  2. Morning are foggy!

    Most-times, I'm groggy.

    Until I've also had my brew...

    ...and until then...phew!

  3. I've had daydreams about night things in the middle of the afternoon.

  4. indeed I do and the hurriedier I go the more harried I become,,, morning, noon, or night.   No exclusive time zones for me.  Light of day, dark of night,,, matters not a whit.

    NICE bit of verse.  Quite enjoyable.

    Now,,, what was I doing before you distracted me ?

  5. Well said. Caffine helps.

  6. That is one of the reasons I get up earlier than I really need to. I have to kinda ease into the day...not jump right into it.

  7. What a morning ! deep description w/ great strength of meaning preserved throughout the poem.Its worthy of a nice day after wards,  and a star.  

  8. Bogus thoughts indeed.  I refuse myself to be confused until I have my morning brew, now where did I put the coffee!  Well penned, my compliments.

  9. yes and that is why i take naps

  10. Nice...

    Several things alleviate that for me.

    1. My purring kitty Farre.  She's my alarm cat.  What a nice way to gently wake up!

    2.  A mega dosage of B complex.  Wall Greens sells a "balanced" B complex that alleviates mental and physical dullness. It's GREAT!

    3.  Chai Tea Latte  (just cause it tastes good)

    4. I nice brisk morning walk with friends or the dog.

  11. I dont suffer poetic confusion..I just get simple middle aged man confusion..It can be fun sometimes though...

  12. Every morning, Ma.  Lovely poem.

  13. Precisely how I feel my dear. Very well written and thought out. LOL

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