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Hi? do you like my story?

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Hi I'm enrico halog and i'm 11 years old and i wrote a story that is for children under 5-9 it is 13 pages but i willl show you the really important part of the story.

* Sells On Time*

one day when mary was walking she saw a toy store and there was a doll that is on a sale she want to buy the doll but her money is not enough she had 10 dollars and the doll cause 50 dollars she need 40 dollars to buy the doll.

she ask her mother if she can give her money but her mother don't gave her any money. She thing agian another idea

aha she said, she need to earn 40 dollars

after 2 weeks she earn 40 dolllars, she quikly go to the toy stroe but she forgot that the sal is just three days and the doll has been sold

mary went home crying, but when she opened hr room she sawthe doll sitting there on her bed, the doll was bought by her father she was very happy she thanked her father and kiss her and greet her happy fathers day! the end

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  1. I hope her parents are always this nice


  2. yes.

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