How are these lyrics?

Question

So sick i almost overdosed on medicine

bring light to the music like Thomas Edison

I'm from the south like a confederate

my life is like a movie, give that man an Oscar

they always ask how i keep the flow so prospered

or how i keep the flow so proper

they call me mr. fly i prefer mr.copter

told me the music was dead i came through like a Doctor

ask him a question he replies with a reply of the truth

ask you a question you reply with a lie for the youth

they like to hear about how you shoot

well mr famous photographer

i can take you out like the auditor

and ill sell out the auditorium

shopping sprees at the emporium

ill live it up on my way to the crematorium

you can't stand me don't buy me

but your not better so don't stand by me

and the flow so fluid like iv

but not the poison ok the poison

but I'm deadly much

might have lost my mind but never lose my touch

I'm gonna be here for a while don't that drive you nuts

never out of it like the infinity

got you three times, nicknamed trinity

money don't last so that's not my main goal

quickly falling like how the rain go

forever is how my reign go

everybody got a dream

its up to you where it takes you

i was always too something that disabled me

from being somebod-y

or could it be

that i was just too me

but ill never break just bend like two knees

Answer 1

LOL DAWG IM LIVIN' IN CHINA BUT I CAN DROP IT BETTER THAN YOU

Answer 2

Borderline horrible.  It rhymes, so at least you are doing better than Lil Wayne.

Answer 3

Ok it's good someof the lines you have, I read them and said ooh that is how good the lines are.  It didn't seem to really flow, but if you raped it out loud with a dope beat behind it I would probably nod to the rythym and say the words with you while I was listening.  I'll tell you what lines were dope in my opinion.  The Edison line, they call me fly I prefer Mr copter, told me the music was dead I came through like a doctor,  I reply with truth you reply with a lie for the youth, crematorium through iv, touch through two knees.  I enjoyed reading it, you're pretty good.  I would like to read other rhymes you write if you don't mind, I would appreciate it if you would send me new raps you write from now on with a date on them, so when and if you choose to stay with this rapping or songwriting.  I can say I knew you first.  I promise I won't steal your rhymes and pass them off as my own.  Everyone knows I can't rap so I couldn't say I came up with it.  But overall a pretty good poem or freestyle rap.

Answer 4

You need to work on your flow, but for the most part it's alright. 2.5/10.

Answer 5

meh........im tired of these questions........

Answer 6

It's a good rhyme, but your verse has no major point. Think of a topic, and spit about it. You'd get a lot better that way by rapping about 1 thing at a time. When people battle rap, all they think about is their opponents and how they can make em look bad.