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How do u like my poem?

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it is called The Water bottle

The Water Bottle written 2008

The water bottle

Round and smooth

quenches my thirst

whenever i want it to

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  1. This is short and cute

    it talks about the water bottle

    I like how you describe its shape

    round and smooth.


  2. very fresh and simplistic......its crystal clear...like water ITSELF!!! lol

  3. Are you looking for alternatives? If so, then how about this:

    The water bottle

    Round and smooth

    Quenches my thirst

    Never fails to soothe

    Just an idea. I'm no expert. =)

  4. ahh! i love it!

    :D

    it made me smile.

    lol. it really did.

  5. it's very william carlos williams - good job.

  6. simple yet paints a picture in my mind. I like it good job.

  7. The water botttle

    Round and Smooth

    Quenches my thirst

    whenever I want it to

    arrived here from the mountains

    it slowly made its way

    to my little hand

    on this oh so special day

    So I thank God for water

    If not, we would be dead

    So lets drink up

    live life

    And only look ahead

    I added some, it was a little short.

    Great start.

  8. it's good...

  9. How ironic, I just drank the last of the water from my water bottle.  Like this poem, I slurped it down quickly and found myself wanting more.

  10. ya..creative :) just add more and it should be a lot better :)

    Good Luck =D

  11. too many words in the last line...

    uh but pretty good.
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