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I need i bit of help?

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well... look, i need you to tell me if wrote something wrong in the next text, like grammar or redaction or whatever, it is for a post on my blog thanks.

here it is:

mm today i noticed my summer is ending, sad i know, but actually i'm happy **i'm back to school**

i wanna c my mates again, i'm not the kinda person who is calling to friend all summer, i, actually think, summer is for my own self, yeah i now I'm selfish, but that's me

although i got pretty good friends (which bothers me, but i'm not saying anything)i'm not feeling to call them, well as i said that's me.

Emmanuel

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  1. I think you mean A LOT of help!

    Here is the grammatically correct way:

    Today, I noticed that my summer is ending. I know it is sad, but I am actually happy to be back in school.

    I want to see my mates again. I'm not the kind of person who is calling her friends all summer. Instead, I think that summer is for myself. I know I am selfish, but that's me.

    Although I have pretty good friends, I don't feel like calling them. That is just me.


  2. It's pretty much wrong from beginning to end.  No capitalization, idiosyncratic punctuation, run-on sentences, "words" that aren't actually words (like 'c' and 'wanna'), and so on.  If you want it to be grammatically and syntactically correct, you'll have to do some work on it.  If it's for your blog, though, do you really care?
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