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I need some help...?

by Guest62426  |  earlier

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Okay, I want to be an actress and a singer... but i dont know how to get started! I have wrote part of a song...can you tell me what you think and critique it?? maybe add a few lines or edit it? THIS SONG IS NOT FINISHED**

he walks down the hall in silence/ only to be greeted by meaness/ All he needs is a friend/ a helping hand/ people dont know him/ for who he is/ yeah/ cause i wish i could/ be that boys best friend/ we'd be close to the end of time.

so it is not done yet. ANY SUGGESTIONS?? I need help to finish it!

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  1. it could use a few more lines efore editing but the song is good ..

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