I wrote a monologue to perform in acting class. The format I wrote it in is not important, I just need to know if it is good. Be honest.
For five hundred years I have roamed this world. For five hundred years I have been alone. Embraced darkness and chosen by fate. For five hundred years I have been immortal. A mere shaow of existance. Not a man but a creature. A creature of the night who feeds on the blood of mortals. Some say I am a beast, a devil, an undesireable. I am damned to walk this earth for an eternity. Bound by fate and existing in the nightmares of small children. Whatdid I do to deserve this fate? What did I do to become this... this thing! This freak! This disgrace to society. Oh God why have you forsaken me? Why have you left me behind? Oh why God? Take the very breath from my lungs, the blood from my veins. Take me from this world! (pulls dagger from pocket.) Let me live no more almighty lord! (stabs self in the heart and flass to knees) Embrace me almighty God. Pull me close to you. Embrace me... embrace me... embrace....(falls dead)
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