Is my haircut poem entertaining?

Question

As I sit here in despair

With razors running thru my hair

Wondering how I will look

I want to look just like the book

First she lifts me up and down

Then she spins me round and round

Now she tells me she's all done

But why did all the women run

Then she says she missed a spot

Oh my god she did not

Where is all the hair I had

Oh she says, you'll be glad

Girls will see you from afar

Even at your favorite bar

They will think that you are kewl

Some of them will even drool

So I'll go there really fast

Making sure the jell does last

Get a seat out in the back

LQQking for that perfect rack

First I'll offer one a drink

Or maybe try a subtle wink

That one turned around to look

Oh my god I need to book

Sure are ugly women here

But they all look good with beer

Guess this wasn’t my best night

Cause all I got, was just a fight

Answer 1

Reads like molasses. Molasses isn't funny.

Answer 2

lol yeah, it rhymes well =] xoxox

Answer 3

yes,   how about your poem for open heart surgery,  or the next major earthquake or hurricane, how about buying a new suit or going to the grocery store,     yeah, your poem is entertaining, thanks