Is this any better?

Question

Do you know what the best sound is?

The sound that takes my breath away.

One song that won't skip.

That one song that plays my comfort words.

That one,

The one song I need to hear.

You know which one it is right?

You should, my love.

It's your beautiful song.

Your beautiful heartbeat.

Answer 1

ya that's about the best i've heard.  i really like you

Answer 2

Sounds like a Jonas Bros. song...sell it to them

Answer 3

that was good

Answer 4

thats really good =] i liked it

Answer 5

The instant of the heartbeat is a chord predominating my vision discord.

I like this, the enrapturing moment that is art

Answer 6

maybe change the word beautiful, I'm not sure why, it just doesn't seem to go with, the rest. I like the emotion behind it though. Stay Strong