Is this good yes? or no?

Question

new beginnings

like baseball innings

slow and progressive

but yet its impressive

how you can be so sincere

without even shedding a tear

dont forget what we had going

we had things set without me even knowing

you took things into your own hands

and im glad because now no one stands

a chance of breaking up me and you

because thats the last thing id want them to do.

i wrote this figured ide get other peoples opinions.

Answer 1

Not bad, good place 2 start.

Revise, revise, revise...

Timothy

:o)

Answer 2

very rhyming i like =]