Life in a box: a poem?

Question

I live in a box

made of glass.

It's quiet there

as the hours pass.

In the box in my head,

I'm who I am.

No need for fear.

No one to condemn.

I grow tired sometimes

of the role that is me.

I act my part

and few really see.

But someday, I'll break out

and stand proud on my own.

No more pain and fear

I'll finally be known.

Answer 1

thats pretty cool.

not sure if i quite understand it..... Cand you tell me what it means?

critque mine?

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Answer 2

Nice.  Pretty good flow, although the line lengths vary quite a bit.

Answer 3

WOW this is really amazing!!

I love this!! Its really good I mean AWESOME!!

That is really creative and you took alot of time on this!!

That is great!! A gift you got !!!!!

Answer 4

I like it :) This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 5

Im glad you found someone to help break down your barriers. This poem is really good, Keep fighting and Well done !!