Limerick???

Question

There once was a lad from dodge city

he was a little witty

he went into town got punched by a clown

and is now on the commite

give your opinion from a 1-10 rating and if you see anything that should be changed please tell me. thanks

Answer 1

yeah, Stab City is better

2nd line - "this lad was a little too witty"

final line - "and now he is on the committee"

7/10 I'd say (after my suggestions :))

by the way, what committee are you referring to?

You could also say for the final line - "and now he is feeling quite S****y"

Answer 2

Your first line is fine.

Your second line needs 2 more words.

Your 3rd line fits into it fine,

You need another word in your last line.

Other then that, you are doing fine!

Keep making the world laugh, its a shame more people are not like you :)

7/10

Answer 3

Thats not great sorry.

Change "dodge" to "stab"

I give it a 2.

Answer 4

The second line is wrong, it doesn't have enough syllables.  Its rhythm has to be like the first line.  Change the last line to "And now he is on the committee".