My beatdown deck rate/fix?

Question

i have been working on this for a while so here it is:

MONSTERS:

x1 cyber - tech alligator

x1 mobius the frost monarch

x1 amphibian beast

x1 vampire lord

x1 goblin attack force

x1 gene - warped warwolf

x2 berserk gorilla

x3 Gemini elf

x3 luster dragon

x3 insect knight

x1 gigantes

x1 ninja grandmaster sasuke

x1 chiron the mage

SPELLS:

x1 my body as a shield

x1 lucky iron axe

x1 brain control

x1 lightning vortex

x1 monster reborn

x1 fissure

x1 smashing ground

x1 heavy storm

x1 hammer shot

x1 premature burial

x1 swords of revealing light

x1 MST

x1 nobleman of crossout

TRAPS:

x2 sakuretsu armor

x1 final attack orders

x1 magic cylinder

x1 compulsory evacuation device

x1 draining shield

x1 torrential tribute

any fix's would be nice and if you could rate it to, this is my faviourite deck and have worked hard on it

Answer 1

Nice deck, even balance of monsters and spell/traps, I'd say a 9/10. optional: even more cards in that that would really support it but don't get me wrong, that's a good deck!

Answer 2

i agree with the others that it is a good deck, but its not great! i am sorry to say this flat out, but since you have little time to prepare for a tournament, this is need to know information! most tournament decks are fast!!! you have some great counter cards in here, and this deck the way it is would definitely win some matches, but tournament play has gotten so advanced in speed that some cards just aren't necessary anymore. if i was in your shoes, i would do this, (if possible):

   1. drop the vampire lord and add more monarchs, whether they be thunder, storm, frost, whatever, just add two more monarchs!

   2. also add more traps! tournament play requires more traps then spells! trust me!

Answer 3

Good Deck a mirror force would come in handy cuz it gets rid of ur opponents face-up monsters.