My poem. Comments appreciated.?

Question

What can I say?

This was unexpected,

We met by chance,

And something happened.

At first I almost drove away,

But something was pushing me to stay.

I turned around, parked my car,

Gave my number to a stranger.

Now this stranger seems less strange,

And I like him a little more each day.

We met by chance,

Or so it seems,

But this was really meant to be.

Answer 1

how cuuuute.

i wish i could just write like that..

but i find myself being forced.

for english class and such.

Answer 2

It's really good I enjoyed it. Keep Writing. =D

Answer 3

Its very nice I don't think the line "And something happened" fits in very well, and maybe for "I like him a little more each day" you could say "I like him more with each passing day" Keep writing poetry, your very good

Don't click on that guys link, I got stuck on that page :(

Answer 4

You go girl!  Just do not rush anything...

Answer 5

Very nice! :)

Answer 6

nice

Answer 7

how you put the words into rhythms that are somewhat different, but all-in-all the same is really great.

and that's really cute, too... how you met that kid.

the best things happen by surprise. =)

Answer 8

Great job, I really enjoyed it. The rhythm really had me going.

You should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think. I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!