My poem. Thoughts?

Question

The small furry beast

She sits in wait of her next meal

She may seem small and harmless

but she will attack without mercy.

Waiting with her larger brother

To whom she is not related

Only in spirit are they joined

Brought together by one domain.

He is of the tiger breed

She is of the Unknown

His own, real, sister

was just like her, if not more gentle.

So I hear thier violent threats

And realize it's time for them to dine,

So I give them what they need,

Some nice Meow Mix.

Answer 1

The cat as small, ferule beast. I like it very much, especially the humorous ending.

Answer 2

It didn't flow well, in my opinion. It felt a little awkward. The idea of the poems is cute, describing the cats like they're more than just that.

Answer 3

LOL!!! I Like it!!! This poem describes what a cat is like!!! =] Good job, and keep on writting!!! =D

Answer 4

Looking for fun and feline groovy! That's very good. There is a group of peotry-bleeding cat lovers in here. The welcome mat awaits you. lol I liked it.

Answer 5

This is a precious little scurry through the smaller trails of poetry... very much enjoyed! I like how you begin in enigmacy and end in humour but all the while it all threads together nicely... thank you for this wonderful excursion into the mind of a cat whisperer!

Answer 6

I also have two cats, a male and female, unrelated.  Indeed, I'm not sure they're from the same universe.  I really liked your first stanza!  Fit's my Grace to a "T".  Thank you for a fun poem.

Answer 7

Nice.  All cats are just little tigers, anyway.

Answer 8

Wow. I didn't like it to be honest. You do have a gift for poerty, but make it so it's not such a "let down" at the end. I wanted them to be real tigers, not cats lol

Answer 9

Quite but if faced with the dragon will you feed or will you challenge

Answer 10

Ha ha! Good cat poem!