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Opinions on this Poem please???

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“It hasn’t been so long, you know.”

My mind would often say to me

Yet distance and time often show

The truth of a harsh reality.

Each morning I awake alone

Without the warmth of you nearby

I realize you’re on your own

From miles away, I hear your sigh.

Across the sea my eyes observe

A faded hope, coming to view

An image appears around the curve

A reflection of none other than you.

With that hope now in my sight

A sense of freedom, like a dove

With endless joy and much delight

I say “I’m coming home, my love.”

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  1. Awww!!! that is so sweet ^-^.


  2. Wow. That is so deep and thoughtful and beautiful! You should show that to her and she will be so touched!

  3. Very good, I love it. If she hasn't seen it yet, she's going to love it too.

    BloodTouch.

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