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My Blue Moon Sky:

My blue moon sky

I shift in presence and leap upon

I walk a dazed and walk in pace

I sit upon and gaze and gaze

Just to see my blue moon sky.

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  1. yup, thats poetry all right, i know cuz it is boring, puts me to sleep, and doesnt make any sense.


  2. Thats cool!

    i like it ...

  3. it's nice

  4. I like it. Just "blue moon sky" paints a vivid picture for me where there are no clouds or stars, just a big full moon. Great job!

  5. :)

  6. wow, it painted a very pretty picture in my head ur pretty good! :- ]

  7. I HATE POETRY

  8. it's not really my type, but i love writing poetry and i respect anyone else who shares that with me.

  9. ohh i like tht!!!!! thts real good!!!

  10. Nice, I love the second line, very expressive. Good job. Keep 'em coming.

  11. Thats really good. it makes me relaxed and calm.

  12. very good luved it

    a STAR FOR YOU!!!:)

  13. It makes me feel calm and happy :)

  14. wow... thats a nice poem...

    it deeply instills a feeling of serenity and paints a vivid mental picture of a cloudless night when one just stares at the moon's aura. Really nice.

  15. Thats lovely

    You should get your own blog page, some people use them to list their creative writing on :)

  16. perfect perfect perfect

  17. I really like that. Very witty. Nice job.

  18. it's short, but it means so much.

    it makes me feel like it's midnite, the moon is high in the sky, and there are blankets of snow covering the ground.

    but that's my interpetation.

    excellent job!

    please do keep writing.

  19. yes

  20. I saw it,

    I read it

    I left it.

    Please don't give up your day job just yet.  You need a bit more practice.

  21. thats really awesome. keep writting and doing what you do!

  22. ok

  23. its good but needs more work.. :)

  24. Nice and concise, I like the rhyme scheme, 8/10

  25. It was really good. Nice free verse poem!

  26. mmmeeeellllooowwww.

    (=

    its nice.

  27. Thats a nice poem.Lol I write them too.
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