Please rate my poem!!!!!!!?

Question

Hearts

the cold black river,

is the blood that runs through my veins.

liquid drips on the surface,

it outlines my heart.

it shatters the miror,

reflecting nothing.

life is nothing but a tear drop

it will soon vanish!

Answer 1

“I understand now why you have brought me here to this deserted isle in the middle of an ocean; to this subterranean palace, which is a sepulcher such as would awaken envy in the heart of a Pharaoh. It is because you love me, is it not, Count? Because you love me well enough to give me death without agony; a death which will permit me to glide away, holding you hand and murmuring the name of Valentine.”  Nice eh? nice poem :)

Answer 2

Sweet tears of love deserve to be tasted

When done in truth they are never wasted.

Understanding of what is real true,

Is why God gives sweet tears to you.

Answer 3

I give it a 5- not good, but not necessarily bad, either. I also don't get why it's named hearts.

The wintry river, black and bleak

The painful throb that caused my shriek

The river of the bloody streak

That runs down my frozen cheek

Answer 4

7/10

Answer 5

This is poetic indeed. A bit spoiled by (this [poetic expression] is the [what the poetic expression really is]). It would be better to not spoil the poetic translation of what you're saying. Your audience would be smarter than you give them credit for.

I'll give it a 7/10. It's short but it still tells us your view on life. The spoiler made your poem a bit bland.

Keep writing.

Answer 6

that's good i'd give it a 7/10