Poem??????

Question

ok this is a poem i just wrote plz tell me what you think of it. and if u want u can think of a title. thnx (:

Enjoying a life, only true in my mind,

For it to be taken away, for someone else to find,

Never given the chance to see what could have been,

The deepest love you held within,

Not knowing left from right,

Loosing all faith throughout the night,

Still trying to grasp yet another used heart,

Before it gets all torn apart,

Wondering what will happen next?

Another dream in the wrong context,

To dead for anything to succumb,

Until the time has come,

Please believe your eyes,

For when we say our good byes,

No one will ever again stray,

But no one will ever truly be here to stay,

Answer 1

A break up poem.

Nice so you like to rhyme to. You know poems don't need to rhyme. In fact poems can be constructed many ways.

Nice job. The part of the deepest love you held within, is good. Why do you jump to not knowing left from right? That is confusing.

I'm so in love i don't know left to right? because you tore out my heart?

So thus the titled it the break up.

Answer 2

i like it