Poetry Help...?

Question

What poem do you like best?

Do you have any suggestions for either???

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Eachouthers hearts

we'll hold forever.

From dawn, to dusk

and dusk, to dawn,

Forever.

From then, to now

and From now, to then

Forever.

From the begnning, to the end

and From that,

to the start,

Forever.

Forever we'll stay,

and,

Forever we'll love,

Forever.

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Eachouthers hearts

we'll hold forever.

From dawn, to dusk

and dusk, to dawn,

Forever.

From the begnning, to the end

and From that,

to the start,

Forever.

Forever we'll stay,

and,

Forever we'll love,

Forever.

Answer 1

Eternal  Love:

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The above can be the title

This poem is about love

and how devoted each person

is to the other one.

The first line

Eachouthers heart

I would change that to

(In our hearts)

we'll hold forever

( we have one another )

I like how this goes

from dusk to dawn

and from dawn to dusk

This is saying day and night

night and day

From beginning to end

end to beginning

A love like this will go on forever

without any end.