Rate / fix my deck?

Question

monsters :

1xhelios the primordial sun

1xdd warrior lady

2xdd surviver

2x bazoo the soul eater

2xshadowpriestess of ohm

2xmutant mastermind

1x dark crusader

1x dark nephthys

1xdd assailant

1x caius the shadow monarch

1xkycoo the gost destroyer

1x dimensional alchenist

1x exiled force

1x banisher of radiance

1x chaosrider gustaph

1xddm differnt dimension master

1x gren maju da eiza

1x dd scout plane

traps

1x bottomless trap hole

1xkarma

2x sinister seeds

1xachhemy cycle

1x sakuretsu amor

1x return from the different dimension

1x order of the emperor

spelles

1x fires of doomsday

1x enemy controller

1x mystical space typhoon

2x dimensional fissure

1x brain control

1x lightnig vortex

1x dark core

1x soul release

1x nobleman of crossout

1x ddr different dimension reincarnation

1x bigbang shot

1x reinforcement if the army

it ok if it bad i made it in 20 minites

Answer 1

i dont get it was is this? yugio? or somthing umm pokemon? idk

Answer 2

drop the shadow priests and 1 bazzoo. drop crusdaers and mindmasters.  add another gren maju and another banisher and helios.  take out sinister seed, order of the empereor should be sided( just for monarchs) and lose the alchemy cycle and the saku. add in 2 macro cosmos and 2 dimensional prisons.

add 2 sould absorbtion ( gain 500 for any card removed from play) and add another ddr. try 2 noble man of extermination. i forgot to say throw in 2 dd dynamites. just wait for your opponents rfp pile to stock up and blow em off at the same time. game.

Answer 3

It looks fine to me I would give it an 8.5/10

Answer 4

Bah, its horrible.. :D Lemme fix this deck up for you..

Monsters : 21

3x Nimble Momonga

3x D.D Survivor

2x Elemental Hero Wildheart

2x Caius The Shadow Monarch

2x Mobius The Frost Monarch

2x Cyber Dragon

2x Giant Rat

1x Exiled Force

1x D.D Warrior Lady

1x D.D Assailant

1x Elemental Hero Stratos

1x Spirit Reaper

Spells : 12

3x Dimensional Fissure

2x Enemy Controller

2x Soul Exchange

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Monster Reborn

1x Heavy Storm

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Reinforcement Of The Army

Trap : 7

2x Solemn Judgment

2x Macro Cosmos

2x Bottomless Trap Hole

1x Return Of The Different Dimension

Happy Dueling!!