Rate my song?

Question

heres part of my song:

well the workshop is gone now he decided to bomb it,every youll pieces of cupid and comet,he tied up his helpers and held the elves hostage and he ground up poor rudolph into reindeer susage,he got dancer and prancer with an old german luger and he slashed up donnet just like freddy kruger,and he took out a flamethrower and barbqued blitzen he took a big bit and said taste just like chicken

Answer 1

Dude, jacking songs is not cool

Answer 2

Calling a song urs when it's not is just bad take it from a song writer

Answer 3

The Night Santa Went Crazy by Weird Al  good job plagiarizing