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Below is the prologue and then the epilogue to a story I started writing about 2 years ago. Let me know what you think.

As I stand alone in the darkness that I was so eager to surround myself in, my heart grows colder. I have taken thousands of lives, and given the chance, I would take thousands more without a second thought. For me, each life I take, is like a dagger through my soul, taking a part of me with each crushing blow. What’s left of me is full of sin, the decisions that I have made, the lives that I have sacrificed for the ones that I love, the future that I have made for my self, I have no regrets…until now. The further that I walk down this path of death and deceit, the further I walk from the light of salvation, the more I die. And as I walk down this path, the more I come to realise the true meaning of eternal darkness, and I wonder, Am I alive, or am I just breathing…

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